Magazine progress 2

My Magazine is now further developed.

Above is my first version (unfinished) of my front cover, i have created this in photoshop. i have had to change this from how i wanted it to look due to space available in the studio, however this front cover is a very typical cover and is much more vibrant. I am unsure about the heavy outlines and of the position of my model, so i think this may need to change.

 Here (above) we have my photo lead, i have reduced the rotation of my sub-header, i have taken away the black behind the header however i have not changed the font as I have decided it is of for this page.

 On this page (above) we can see that i have kept the main structure of the columns however i have moved the breakout box onto the next page (below) and i have positioned more pictures differently than i was going to so that it brings the page alive and so that there is more variety rather than a boarder.

finally on this page (above) we can see that i have placed two images on the page edge and positioned the breakout box at the end of the article. as well as this, i have only used one column, this is because there would not be enough room for two and also by the time the reader reaches this page, the will hopefully be already involved with the article enough not to notice the slight increase in writing appearance.